2 points
2 points - The first draft is thoughtful and a good start to an effective persuasive essay. It demonstrates an understanding of the classical argument.1 point - The student completes a first draft that demonstrates an understanding of the classical argument0 points - The first draft is inadequate
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At first, I meet all deadlines that I should keep. Also, when I wrote my essay, I feel that there is no such a 'hardship'. I think I did it well generally.
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arguments are based off of opinions and personal feelings.
3) What could you have done better?
Research.
I think much research makes my essay more reliable to others.
3) What could you have done better?
Research.
I think much research makes my essay more reliable to others.
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4) Which part of the classical argument did you use the best?
The Confirmation.
I think my logic is not bad.
4) Which part of the classical argument did you use the best?
The Confirmation.
I think my logic is not bad.
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5) Which part of the classical argument did you use the most poorly?
The Narration.
When I wrote it, sometimes I feeled that "what I did at that time is really right?"
5) Which part of the classical argument did you use the most poorly?
The Narration.
When I wrote it, sometimes I feeled that "what I did at that time is really right?"
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6) What's your strategy to make your second draft better?
Grammaer check ( to make readers understand my essay more easily.
Check my logic ( to convine readers more effectively.)My narration is strong. I do a good job explaining the foundations of the issue, and I prepare my audience to hear my argument.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Grammaer check ( to make readers understand my essay more easily.
Check my logic ( to convine readers more effectively.)My narration is strong. I do a good job explaining the foundations of the issue, and I prepare my audience to hear my argument.
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